Hi Rylan,I really like your writing about your holiday. I think that you could have wrote with a bit more detail like what type of dog duke is and more about what you did while you were there. Jack.
Hi Rylan,
ReplyDeleteI really like your writing about your holiday.
I think that you could have wrote with a bit more detail like what type of dog duke is and more about what you did while you were there.
Jack.